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Hi my name is Harry. Last week
when we arrived at the tairawhiti enviro center we walked through a metal gate and then I was not sure if it would be cool or lame but anyway so we walked in and they said put your bags on the ground and then we sit down on the floor or these bean bags that I think are made of plastic bottles
and on the bus ride I tried to find stavers aka stiffy or stiffy jo or stiffy go and then I found stiffy and I think the kids were singing wheels on the bus the wheels on the bus go round and round round and round the wheels on the bus go round all day long the end of the song but not the end of the story this story is just getting started
Kia ora Harry, I like how you started your story with where and when, next time remember to include who, what and why if you can. Also it is important to finish writing your recount before you publish.
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